Comments - The last message parts I , II & III

Bianca ( C ) at 2007-09-30

Wow! poem like story i get it you almost may me cry keep on writting

aliciamayle at 2007-10-01

I love it but Ive seen it before i think some one put it in a note book or something but great job it is really amazing

volleychica comment on my poems some time

alicia mayle

Khanyisile Cele at 2007-10-11

That was really sad. It is a good poem. Well done!!!

Me at 2007-10-15

Astounding. I am very much impressed. You presented the situation through its most sincere perspective. Really great.

When Doves Cry ( F C ) at 2007-10-16

This is a fantatsic poem! Good ending 5/5

esther at 2007-10-19

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!

lilien at 2007-10-27

It's a great one!! really touching!

ashley at 2007-10-28

This story is so sad but is one that realli kept my attention...i loved it

maggielou at 2007-10-30

This is crazy good.

XoXotears of stealXoXo at 2007-11-09

Wow that was amasing sad and lovely just lovely is all i can think to say keep it up!!


Tania at 2007-11-13

What a sad but beautiful poem I love it.
It's like romeo and Juliet

Kayli ( F C ) at 2008-01-10

This is the second time ive read this poem, the first i had just started and hadnt quite figured it all out. it still touched me and has found its way onto my fav list. you wrote about such a meaningful topic and even added a little twist. it truly is an amazing poem and i congratulate you. you are a very talented writer! keep it up :)

moonlil ( F P C ) at 2008-01-16

This is an amazing poem. I got tears in my eyes...its so sad.Great poem! It touched me.

xHakushikaXNorikox ( P ) at 2008-01-17

That was sooooooo sad!!!!!!
I seriously had tears in my eyes!!!!!
They were about to fall out but my mom is on the opposite side of the room, so I tried to hold it in!
Keep up the good work!!!!!

Neil Marsden ( P ) at 2008-01-20

An excellent micro-shot of life and a reminder to all of us to beware the green eyed monster!
Well Done! Neil.

love ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-22

This poem made me cry. i love this poem. it shows that he was truly in love.


SarahDale ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-30

That made my teardrops run down my face, it was so so sad. . . awfully sad yet great! T_T

Kristina ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-30

*tear* god.. this is such a wonderful poem. The flow was utterly amazing, the rhyming was great, the message was awesome. I loved it from begining to end.. oh and by the way, thanks for making me cry in my Studyhall.. lol jkjk.. i don't cry very often from poems, *actually i think that this may have been my first time.. lol* but this is a very moving piece. I love it! You did such a wonderful job putting all of this feeling and emotion onto paper. I cannot get over how wonderful this poem is! I really love it.. keep up the great work :]

YOURgonnaLOVEme ( F P ) at 2008-02-08

Omg that is the greatest poem ever!! i actually teared up! so sad!!!! i love it!!! keep writing!
alwayz sunny,

jessie ( C ) at 2008-02-09

This poem is very very good I enjoyed reading it, even though it made me sad. Keep up the good work!!!

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