Comments - To My Unborn Child...

amanda at 2005-07-14

great loved it

amanda at 2005-07-14

great loved it

LeAnn at 2005-07-14

you are such a good poet....

Chelsi ( F P C ) at 2005-07-14

This is a very touching poem!! I know you will be a great father, if you have followed what you want your son to follow. I hope everything goes well!! Great job!! 5/5

Alex D. ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-14

its good!! check out some of my poems if you get a chanse

bneathxmyxeyesx3 at 2005-07-14

That was the most sensory senteneced affectioate poem I have ever read. The passion and the affection really showed in this miraculous poem. Unbelieveable job!

Nicole at 2005-07-14

He is ganna have the best father in the world....I just wish my son could have a fatehr that caresas much as you do.......

Jade at 2005-07-14

omg this poem is so cute.Your son is going to be lucky to have a great dad like you. I only wish i could have a father like you 2

Jordan at 2005-07-14

that's a really good poem. it's the best feeling in the world to know you brought life into it.

xLoVe HuRtSx ( P C ) at 2005-07-14

amazing matt, this poem shows true love. do u really have a son? if u dont, u sure fooled me. i didnt think any person especially a guy (no offence) could have such passion like that unless its from experience. great job keep writing

Allison ( C D ) at 2005-07-14

Wow, This is an amazingpoem. Congrats if there is a little one on the way. You sound liek you'll be an amazing father, and poet! Great job!

tiffany ( F C ) at 2005-07-14


seanna at 2005-07-14

very good writing and good luck with the baby and everything else

Kiara at 2005-07-14

Oh my gosh that was such an amazing and inspirational poem. I loved it so much. Are you really gonna be a dad? If so I bet you'd be a great one...I totally rate your poem a perfect 10 it's too good for a 5. If u would like you can read sum of my poems too even though they're not as good as thanks .... Kiara

Millena at 2005-07-14

That is one of the most touching poems I've ever heard.

Congratulations if you are expecting your son.
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~Britty~Nlove ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-15

omg that was soooo good 5/5 plez r/c mine if you have the time

sinister ( F C ) at 2005-07-15

5/5. excellent job. my dad dies went i was 2 so i never really knew him. reading your poem, i hope he felt the same way bout me as you do bout your son.

samantha at 2005-07-15

wow i love the poem actually i have a website and if u wanna add your poem with YOUR name attached to it i would love it so much.... so please think about it and if you agree please send me your permission, your name, and your poem to and you can view my site its ...... tell your friends ;)

Willie ( P ) at 2005-07-15


Meggie ( P ) at 2005-07-15

Awwe! That was such a sweet poem! Keep writing and good luck with the baby! Please vote and comment on mine please! I can't wait to read more of your stuff! 5/5

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