Comments - The Drunk Driver

♥~AlReAdY dEaD iNsIdE~♥ ( F P C ) at 2005-12-18

Wow! This was sucha good poem! I really liked it...great flow. keep it up.

Sarah ( C ) at 2005-12-19

Omg...that was so sad. My mouth just dropped when I read the last line. I actually got butterflies. I have no idea why. That was a really good poem and I loved the way you wrote it. Awesome job! 5/5


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Hannah ( P ) at 2005-12-19

Your really good to keep the rhyming going, and i think it was a good story..and yet also a great poem.
loved it


Jorga at 2005-12-19

Awwwww dat was sooooo sad bt da bomb poem man keep it up!

hopeless08 ( C ) at 2005-12-19

Hey, this poem is absolutely amazing. I really like it a lot. Nice job.

James at 2005-12-19

I like think this good

Carrie ( F P C ) at 2005-12-19

This is really good.. its so sad tho... great write..5/5

samantha at 2005-12-19

Thats a ****** GREAT poem!!!!

jennifer Root at 2005-12-19

Very good use of words and illusion

Danielle Knotts at 2005-12-19

Awesome job keep writing you are great at it....

Natalie84 ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-19

Beautiful write! Truly a message to be heard! So many think it's ok to drive after one or two drinks...this is a real example of the idiotic decision. True or false in your life it's happened to many. A tragic way to end life but one all too many know. Your flow was flawless and the message behind it truly divine! Excellent write! :)

mattsgurl at 2005-12-19

Omg that is so sad

Razorblade ( F C ) at 2005-12-19

Aww. You'd have to just kill me if that ever happened to me. Very meaningful poem and awesome write! 5/5


chiquita ( F P C ) at 2005-12-19

This is so deep and sad and is greatly written u r very talented. plz read and comment on sum of mine.

BeautifulCutter ( F P C ) at 2005-12-19

I loved this poem, it's freakin awesome! Keep up the good work!!! :)

brittany ( F C D ) at 2005-12-19

OMG great job. i loved it . it made me cry.

brittany ( F C D ) at 2005-12-19

OMG great job. i loved it . it made me cry.

†nella† ( P C ) at 2005-12-19

I love this poem. its great.

Dolores DLF at 2005-12-20

WOW...I already voted but I skipped the comment. This is still new for me!! Anyway, That was so cool. I never expected that it was her boyfriend!! Great job!!!

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