Comments - You'll See

Tara-Kay ( F C D ) at 2006-12-10

You know, i love people that are strong, and i can see from your poem that you are very strong, and you don't let anything get you down.
this poem was awesome, it flowed well, had good wording, imagery was great and i loved it.
well done

~~How Is It You Did This~~ ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-10

I love this shows that ur not gonna let him or whoever control you...5/5 keep up the good work!!
xoxo am

captured heart at 2006-12-11

GREAT POEM! i loved it. it just flows so well. i can really keep it up girl!

Nobody ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-11

Quite a positive, possibly self-denying, view of a break up.

Those nights of girly madness can drive a young lad crazy though.

Lix at 2006-12-11

HELL YEAH!!!! that's graet!!!! I wish I could feel like that after a breakup.... Really awsome... U ROCK

cupidsxvictim at 2006-12-12

Wow, this poem took my breath away. I can definately tell you felt what you wrote. && that makes this poem even more stunning then it is! Keep up the great poetry.

MASCARA-TEARSā™„ ( F P C ) at 2006-12-12

"You think I'll never laugh again
And be consumed in sadness
But you'll see how happy I've become
Nights out of girly madness"

This is a great stanza hunny! I love it! This poem is very independent and strong, I love it!

myshiningstar14 ( F P C ) at 2006-12-14

Thats so true guys assume well be that way but sumtimes you realize you nvr really were in love and you dont even shed a tear and are able to move on..excellent write

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