Comments - How Could I Ever Leave You ( Collab)

mohamed ( C D ) at 2007-05-07

Its reallly a superp poem... you have writen it very perfactly you have used excallent words...u have described it so well.. to b frank my eyes got wet we i read it... its becos i also have been tru such feelings.

Sitting alone in this midnight train
Traveling in my daily nightmares
Looking out the bleeding window
Haunting memories pasted in layers...

i like those lines very much cos i had tried to write a poem like this but i was unable to discribe.... your whole poem is fantastic...
i have submited only very few poems... take a look at it wen u have time..keep it up...


robin milford ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-07

Great job u 2 excellent love poem

AboveTheCrowd ( C ) at 2007-05-08

I think this poem is just great! It's like a tells your emotions and you can feel the pain! Great job!

neo ( F P C ) at 2007-05-08

Were you listening to music when u wrote this?

Jimmy.Lugendo at 2007-05-08

Very creative and real!you guys are gifted.

Libbz at 2007-05-08

This is such a good poem. It is one of the best love poems that i have heard in a long time. Your verses made me feel as if i was alone and depressed. This is truly great poetry!

Great Job
Libby K.

Louis at 2007-05-08

Wow, so beautiful, feels like a prayer, very spiritual; I tend to use lots of rhymes to make it appeal to the ear but yours has very few rhymes if any at all but is still very charming 5/5

sarah ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-08

Awsome poem

End Of Eternity ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-09

Congratulations deserve every bit of this success.

Champagne Time... :o))

Eat my leg and have my feet at dinner...lololol

ShootingStar179 ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-09

Cindy, dear, what a heartbreaking piece. Your skills for imagery are very nice. I love this piece, and what a nice collab! Congrats to you and your partner in writing this!

Take care.

Natalie ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-13

Wow , this is sad, but awesome...check out my poems....

The Heart Broken Girl ( F P C ) at 2007-05-16

OMG..this poem made me cry so hard. it touched my heart. This is the exact and by exact i mean EXACT way i feel right now...this is the way i feel about a guy i still love but he won't even look at me anymore.
if you don't mind...would it be ok..if i gave this poem to show him i need him here with me...i want to be with him again?
Thank you so much
5/5 from me...beautifully written...

if you get the chance..comment ona couple of mine too
Thanks much!

M1K4 ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-17

This is beautiful i love it! I can totally relate you shoud read my new poem scared, it is on the same topic i know you'll like it! keep it up cuz you are now on my favorites!

shan at 2007-05-19

I love this poem it is very touching

Keanna Hopkins ( C ) at 2007-05-21

No faith in god no trust in that

masked_senses ( F P C ) at 2007-05-24

...well...just perfect...not a poem...a real emotion...

Nomad at 2007-05-25

Nice poem, brings out the anguish with great level of genuine feel.
The last four lines seem a bit out of place, though.

RETARTED GHOST ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-04

this poem is fabulous.what can i say about this poem.a beautiful piece.the ryhming was good.the flow was also good.5/5
great work
hope we stay in touch!!!

girl hiding in a broken smile ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-08

Wow i wish i can one day be half as good as you. You are one of the few inspirations in my writing you really know how to express your feeling in words something i would love to be able to do.....better
just me

Dead to all at 2007-06-13

Im speechless

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