Comments - Dreams

alex at 2005-08-15

this is so shows that even in short poems you can express yourself fully!! keep it up

Genie Hawk ( F ) at 2005-09-10

Very cute poem

Pamela ( F P C ) at 2005-09-15

Abso-fabity-lutely-brill! i SO know what you mean!!!

Gabriella ( F C ) at 2005-10-02

That is sooo good--- i dream like that everyday and wake up and no its not going to happen!! u rock chicky

Gabriella ( F C ) at 2005-10-02

Really good- i could relate to ur poem heaps rock on chicky

apple at 2005-10-19

This poem is my life i really liked it i told my boyfriend it and he said that u should get it published

rene at 2005-10-21

Wow really nice

i feel better knowing i aint the only one having dreams like this. keep up the good job

~da gymnast~ at 2005-10-24

Excellent poem! Short and sweet and I can relate to it so easily! Keep up the fantastic work:)

Holly at 2005-11-24

I really like this poem its really cute....I know how it feels!

...So SicK... ( F P C ) at 2005-12-09

Gr8 poem!!! :) short but i love it!!!

♥ alwayz lovely at 2005-12-19

Ohhhhhhhh.. ic u must really like this person u wanna be with..

NiCE job although there was a typo..


Again.. Wonderful job

◊•°ﮜңдй°•◊ ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-21

Short & Sweet,,,i like it,,,check out mine

eric pana at 2006-02-19

Can i borrowed it? hehehe...(",) joke
good job! keep writing!

~Amanda~ at 2006-04-22

I liked this poem a lot, it wus short, sweet, and to the point, good job!

Rain ( C D ) at 2006-06-03

Short and sweet! You rhymed very well. I could tell you put alot of heart into it. ~Take care

Jessica at 2006-06-14

I love your poem keep up the great writing!

Jessica at 2006-07-19

i liked it.

Kirsty palmer ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-27

Awww... how cute!!!!i loved this peom it was so sweet! and i can really relate to it.. keep it up 5/5... hope you will read and comment some of mine... it would be nice to see what ou think.. Kirsty Palmer xx

John Heimbecher at 2006-08-26

Very enjoyable read for me. I like the quick delivery in each and every line. Loved the emotion. Keep up the writing!

Zach ( F P C ) at 2006-09-15

Short and sweet... i loved it

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