Comments - Acceptance

Brittany ( P C D ) at 2007-08-04

I've already read this poem once, and actually added it to my favourite before you asked me to comment it. Just thought I'd let you know that it's amazing and I'm not just returning a favour. It's really brilliant. I love the title.

livin in a lonely hell ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-05

Very true ...great job me love all the way
you made the words fit together so perfectly
thats what poets do they put together words that seem that they dont make sense
but true poets can find the deep meaning under it great job

Crystal Gaze ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-31

I really like this peice. Not to mention your poem's, there all interesting or inspiring, with hidden message's or advice inside.
You are very talented and creative.

The opening line was attention grabbing, it made you want too read, and that is good:)

*Broken down and tainted; unwilling to love again,
Staggering in agony and drowning in lost hope.
Trying so hard to find the path they've lost,
Attempting with all energy left to cope.*

^ This was my favourite stanza- It was your most powerful in the peice..

*And though I still sit among lost memories,
I've open myself and done what those girls can't.
To slowly reveal the heart inside of me,
And accept the love of another man.*

^ This was an excellent way too end the poem, I really enjoyed the closure:)

5/5, You really deserve it.

AblissfulDREAMER ( F C D ) at 2007-10-21

Very powerful poem you have here. I did enjoy the language you used but I do think the flow was shaky and forced. The message you protrayed is one I can agree with and the poem was overall a joy to read. *5/5*

Gloria ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-29

Wow ive been thro that too!! and i understood the whole thing.....prolly cuz i mean i have gone thro that!! and i realized i needed i wanted better!

Junaid at 2008-02-23

Anything closed to reality make sense... and it does make sense.

Michael at 2008-03-01

Rly twiggy chann yu rly are an amzin poet :]
-yer lil brother

MyuhhhBuggg ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-25

Wow hun! this is brilliant! :]
i loved every stanza! great write!
i love your work!

sorry i've been really busy and haven't gotten on here much. miss ya too hun!<3

Anonymous Angel ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-28

I liked your poem, the flow was great, just as great as your vocab:)
Its a poem some people can relate too, like me.. keep up the good work!
kisses stephanie

Finding myself at 2008-05-09

This was good
i could fully understand it

karina ( P ) at 2008-05-27

Koo i liked it

maryann at 2009-11-26

Hey i just found this in my favs I don't remember reading it but i just wna say its amazing and it makes perfect sense :) tc

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