Comments - How Do I Tell You?

Wake ( F P C ) at 2007-11-03

"..If you feel the same
Will we be
If not will we even
Still be friends

I'm confused and don't know
What to do
All i know is the love
I have for you, is real.."

written in simple words.. had a thinking flow to it.. nicely done.. Keep Writing =D


~Wake~

it hurts so bad ( F ) at 2007-11-04

Wow i liked this poem alot
shows alot of emotions for someone that you must truly love very nice

5/5

Blake =]

WilTED ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-05

Awe. this was beautiful.
5/5.

sarenightmarexx ( P ) at 2007-11-06

This is an ace poem keep it up!

natalie at 2007-11-08

Hey gd poems ive felt like that before, i tend to write sad poems mainly aswell
keep up the gd work

Kelvin Masi ( F P C ) at 2007-11-11

No one needs to ask how but ur just an excellent poet.wat a sweet poem u wrote! as a matter of fact its 1 of my favourite poems. but i must question wat goes in ur mind? well done, keep it up

shattered dreams ( F C D ) at 2007-12-16

Wow thats cute. i hope you have courage and tell that guy. i loved this poem

~shattered dreams~

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS ( F C D ) at 2007-12-19

Very very very good poem. I can relate to this 100% right now! I loved this poem. 5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

Jason Meres ( F C D ) at 2007-12-26

I'd say that's a pretty good start to telling someone how you feel. Not a bag middle or ending either. But i'm sure you've figured this problem out long ago without any help from me. *smiles*

Alissa ( F P C D ) at 2007-12-30

This was good, but I know you can do better. I felt it was a little bit of a cliche. Don't get me wrong, those are awesome to write about but it would be so much more interesting if you expanded on your vocab. Make me wonder what you mean yet give me a certain image. You just stated everything in this, Poetry should have depth. You can do that, you had it in your other poems. Just try to write from the heart, not your head. :)
You are amazing though, don't stop writing.

G ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-04

Very very beautiful!

Sumit Ojha ( F C D ) at 2008-03-07

Excellent poem... I like it...
Well, I don't know too much about writing poems... But, I think that is a wonderful poem...
You are really nice poem... Keep up this good work :)

xBxRxOxKxExNx ( F C ) at 2008-03-21

It's really good! it totally moved me..! if only i could say the same about the boy i'm in love with... X


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