Comments - Cupid's little arrow

amy j aud at 2008-02-11

I love it

Lizaveta ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-13

So sweet
i like how you put together sad&positive things

DeathlyAmore ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-13

Now this was a POEM. I totally captured your vision of the poem.

My favorite line was
"he urge to kiss you here and now is a feeling hard to fight"

It's hard ain't it? Hope you find a valentine rather than cupid. I swear, one day I am going to get in shape and kick his arse. He ruined my life so many times.

I will break his bow and arrows and use them as toothpicks.

I love this poem, really.



InvisiblyBroken15 ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-15

Awwwww beautiful poem to read on valentines day....i love all of your poems that i've read...great're very talented.5/5

LostAndConfused ( C ) at 2008-02-18

The arrow in your heart is now connected with another,
Holding hands and kissing faces you now do love each other,
This wound is still a part of me and will not go away,
Remind me to tell Cupid, Happy Valentines Day.

Loving the ending its really amazing it pulls the whole piece together, very emotional piece, great job 5/5

xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx ( C ) at 2008-03-11

I agree love the irony in this piece 5/5

Lost and Confused ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-12

I know in comments people always hate this... but I have to say it. Aww!!! I really loved it. Its such a beautiful love poem. And such an interesting and unique concept. It was so well-written and displayed such a beautiful emotion. Very impressive... 5/5

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Spirit ( F P C D ) at 2009-01-15

I love love love the ironic ending. This poem has a small light-hearted-ness about it, making it diffenent from all the other dark poems in your collection. It's refreshing to see an artist go slightly out of there own box every once in a while. Usually when people try new things the poems come out good, but not great. I believe that you handled the transition beautifully and with natural ease.

This poem may not have perfect rhyme but the flow more than makes up for that. Each stanza melts into the other one making it all the more easy to read.

the only thin negetive that I can think to say would be, I wish you had a few more lighter-hearted poems.

thanks for the read>~Spirit~>

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