Comments - I Won't Give Up On Us Now

tubaman1325 at 2004-12-12

hey, that is like what has just happen with me, i mean that's almost exactly what happen. Thanks for writting that. I know that what me and my gf have will last. thanks

Abzy ( F P C ) at 2004-12-12

Thats amazing, I'm adding you to my favourites, u av a gr8 guy! And ur a gr8 writer!

Crystal at 2004-12-12

This Poem makes me think alot about how much i is my relationship could of ended up. You are a really good writer. Keep it up i enjoy readin you poems.

~!~ Crystal ~!~

Ashley at 2004-12-12

Good job. Next time try to express yourself a little more.

Mel at 2004-12-12

I just dont know wat to say...
Im not to into long poems but Your poem Toni i could not go with out reading... It brough tears to my eyes... i love it Good work

Xxdarkangel66600 at 2004-12-12

Wowness nice poem i liked it keep writting :)

~jennifer~ at 2004-12-12


Toni ( F P C D ) at 2004-12-13

Thanku so so so much!!!! xxxxxxxx*hugs*

Sherene at 2004-12-18

Awww!! Thats Soo Lovely.. Th Same Haz Hpnd 2 Me Bt We Ended.. Sad Huh?
Thatz Really Good n Made Me Realize Ov Al Th Problems That Were Caused.. He Waz There 4 Me And I Mainly Took My Anger Out On Him, But Like You Said - He DID Stand By Me!
Thankz A Lot Gyal
Read Mah Poem.. Therz 1 Abt Him, He Hurt Me And He May Wanna Get Bak With Me But I Aint Sure, I Love Him A Lot And I Dont Know What And Who I Am Without Him..
Jus Chek It Out Gyal. Whenevah U Can!

Toni ( F P C D ) at 2004-12-18

Thanks hun!! xxx

Toni ( F P C D ) at 2004-12-20

Hi! Thanku SO much! Sure you can show it him if u relli think its that gud! Thankuu :-) xxx

Oliver Stevenson ( F P C D ) at 2004-12-21

I Love You :-)

Toni ( F P C D ) at 2004-12-21

:-) x

Oliver Stevenson ( F P C D ) at 2004-12-23

Great poem hun :-D Loved it :-D xxx keep up the brill writing xxx

CinnamonTwirl ( F C D ) at 2005-03-08

Beautiful poem, keep up the amazing work. 5's too you.

Broken Soul ( P ) at 2005-09-05

Damn... that is soo deep. I can so relate to this. 5/5 FOR SURE!!!!

Marc at 2005-10-19


This poem is beautifull. Filled with such power. I am right now in this situation and would love to recite this poem to my gf. This poem shows great love to the women you love. Sincere and so pure. This has to be one of the most well-wrote poem i have ever read. you should really think about publishing this poem.

Keep up the GREAT work. I hope ur relationship works well.

I love this poem!

Lesbian ( F C D ) at 2005-11-16

This is the same thing that happened to me too
i dont know what to do. to make her stay with me

its a good poem
really :)

Jess ( F P C ) at 2006-01-19

Hey toni
i love this peom. It really reminds me about my relationship I am in now. Keep up the good work

xUnbreakablex ( F P C ) at 2006-04-16

Its people like you who inspire me to write. well done another brilliant poem! xxx

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