Comments - A Prayer Before Sleeping

Bambee at 2005-09-30

WOW!! Standing ovasion. hahaha!

Rachael at 2005-09-30

This is the kind of guy every girl wants and deserves

TLM4eVa at 2005-10-05

Omg thts so sweet!! i love it!

roseanna at 2005-10-11

Beautifully written. You added sort of a modern tone to the poem, which is cool. I think I'm that woman you're talking about, lol

Laura ( F P C D ) at 2005-10-14

I am spechless that was such a good poem. There are ladies like that out there and I hope you get lucky enough to find one. Your talent is greater than any kind words I could give you. 5/5 for sure. Check out some more of ma poems if you get a chance. I would love some tips on improving.

luba at 2005-10-20

I wrote a poem in response check it out plz it's called Prayer Answered

adele ( F ) at 2005-11-05

I love the way that you right, i am falling in love with the image that you present.
please don't ever change

brittany at 2005-11-10

That's one of the best prayers i've heard. If it hasn't been answered already, i hope it does soon.

creasy ( F P C D ) at 2005-11-18

Awww that was really sweet. nicely written. Excellent job keep it up! take care. :)

Robert Gardiner ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-01

Very nicely done Matt and what a girl!!!

sweetcherries09 ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-12

I logve your poems they are all so sweet. I have only herd one other guy sound as sweet before and that was my first love. You seem like a really sweet guy, find love and be happy!!

Lauren at 2005-12-28

You are truly talented.
kudos to you my friend.

rachel at 2006-01-05


reaching out ( F P C ) at 2006-02-06

Wow, loved this poem! well done, its beautiful
take care x x x

Phillip at 2006-02-07

Wow is all that i can say ^^ keep it up!

Sarah ( C ) at 2006-02-11

Halu stranger,

This poem is truly amazing...I love your work. I actually got butterflies while I was reading it out loud. Your words kept me hungry for the next line, never wanting it to end. This was so beautiful. I love the Big Papa Love part. Lol That made me laugh. I hope you fine this girl...she's out there somewhere.

Looking forward to reading more,

Jess ( F P C ) at 2006-02-23

This is such a good poem.....keep up the good work and if you get a chance read mine it is called This was meant to be

Jess ( F P C ) at 2006-05-04

I love this poem. You get a 5/5 no questions asked

lizz03 ( F P C D ) at 2006-05-23

OMG OMG OMG that was so amazing wow your so good at writing im mesmerized by your work and i truely think you have a gift

5/5 x1000000

Colby ( F P C D ) at 2006-06-19

Wow this is probably one of the greatest poems I've ever read. It is extreamly good. I would even want to count how many have said a prayer similar to this one every night.

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