Comments - But That Time

TaperedDreams ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-16

Aw great work on this, it was very inspirational. Thanks for the comment on my poem.


>black&&blue ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-19

I can say one thing:

People don't know what they had till its gone.

I can tell you really care about this person. This is a really good poem. I like your work.


-»FάĐэđ © ( C D ) at 2006-07-22

Very nice write. I thought this was great. Nothing at all should be changed. Keep it up! 5/5


xDarkSuicidex ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-23

With all due respect, I don't like this one as much as the other that you wrote. Maybe that's just because it purtains to me a lot...

But it was still a nice write.. I'm not sure I understood it fully, though.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

Trine at 2006-07-24

I really really like it
you truely are a great poet.

Amber at 2006-07-26

This is my favorite poem also. your a very good poet. oh thanks for the speeling error on mine i wouldnt have caught it. this is a very good poem.

farah ( F P C ) at 2006-07-28

Very good one ur poems i can relate now..i never imagined i would to any poem..but now it seems like ur poems are speaking my heart..the words and feeling i fail to put to word....looking forward to more of ur poem sir

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-02

I don't believe I have read any feelings expressed more eloquently

Lesbian ( F C D ) at 2006-08-02

Its very well written, i loved this part:

"I will not have pity.
You will look for me,
In every road and street.
But that time,
I will not be in this city."

its nice how you arranged it,,, and added pity and city,,, made it sound reall good :)

Keep it up!

рортаят™ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-03

Very Very True. I can see why it's your favorite. It was very well written. I enjoyed it alot. Great job. :)

Bhavingr8 ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-05

Better than the best works of yours. well written. thanks for sharing and thanks for commenting and voting my poems. take care. 5/5 of course.

♀Paper♀ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-06

I Enjoyed this poem. its simple to read and flows well. n for clarification simple isnt bad.. lol had to say that some people are insulted and i dont like to insult people.
I really like how you made the transition from love to acceptance of moving on.
putting "today" and "tomorow" on thier own lines was an awsome way to make people realize the change in ones life.
lol maybe i understood the meaning a little off what you wanted but it was a good poem once again n many people can connect to it.


Bridgette ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-09

Wow.. I think this is definitely my favorite poem that I've read that you have written. It has made me feel a lot better about my recent break up for some reason. Thanks for sharing this.. I really needed it. You did a wonderful job on this! 5/5

Ashley at 2006-08-11

You really have talent, I respect you :)

myshiningstar14 ( F P C ) at 2006-08-12

Theres no solid drive for your poems..teh yjsut are you need detail..your a good potential writer but try detail..


Mimi at 2006-08-16

LOVELY!!!!! most poets write what they feel. Are you lonley? has something bad happened to you before in a relationship? Because I really do feel your poems. You bloom me and I become a rose when I read your poems. You have such an extrodinary talent...and I LIKE IT! If you would please check out my poems also "Untamed thoughts "Just like a ghost" "Nobody's listening" please, go ahead. Your poems are so great everytime I read one I wish I could rate behond 5! I should never say keep the good work up your poems are so expresive no one could ever see a error. I'm speechless!!!

Tragic Reason ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-27

It's my favorite poem you ever wrote, too! lol I absolutely loved it. You have some great lines in here that just stand out and make this poem stellar.

.:*henri*:. at 2006-08-27

I love the poem it's really gd...thanx for leaving a comment i loved reading yours aswell ^-^

Aline ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-27

U have the special meaning in it..the special message, that what made ur poem real :)

Letty....aka Letrice Hopkins ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-01

Take a bow ! Because you just
recieved a round of applause . You are
a brilliant writer . the words you write
just flo's so perfectly . I wish it were
that easy for me ; You have the kind
of talent that takes some of the worlds
greatest poets year's to get . I really
love this poem . I can't waite to see
you book of poetry, it must be full of
masterpieces . Keep of the spectecular
work . Because I'll be watching you .

Love ya

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