Comments - Tears on a Keyboard

Juggalette 2 Dope at 2007-10-25

Oh my! That's amazing! I almost started crying...

If I smile the world wont see my ( F P C ) at 2007-11-25

Wow. this is amazing. i love it.

What Else Can I Do ( F P C ) at 2007-12-21

OMJ this is a cute poem ... i love this poem... great job!!

"He knows exactly what's in her heart,
That her love for him is surely true,
He doesn't want for them to part,
But feels there's nothing he can do."

^^ thats my favorite stanza... i know how you feel... this has happened to me before... i can relate to this. keep up the good work... 5/5

xXSaraBethXx ( F C D ) at 2007-12-29

Great Job..
Well Written..
The Flow was great..
I loved it...<33*

c 0 n f u s e d ( F C D ) at 2007-12-29

:) Love it!

rachel at 2007-12-30

Nicely done!

gabriella ( C ) at 2008-01-16

I lvoe this poem and the ending x and o very talented keep on writting

me just you ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-15

Wow...that was really sad...but you wrote it so well i didn't want the poem to end 5/5<33

Brandy at 2008-03-27

Wow. Thats all i can! This poem was simply A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. I could really feel the emotion of this poem. I absolutely L-O-V-E-D it. Keep it up.


Hayley at 2008-04-27

This is one of the better poems I've ever read. I think the rhyming is phenominal and the rhythm was great. This one hits home.

A5hl3igh at 2008-06-02

That was beautiful, i related to it so much! Truly inspiring!

Nikoshiana ( F P C ) at 2008-08-24

Extremly touching, ifelt every word, having nce been in the same situation as said girl, brought a tear, again, still, to my eye. great write

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