Comments - Sweet Love's Deceit

BECCA lessTHANthree ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-14

The flow was flawless.. i prefer not so many rhymes but because like i feel it did in this one.. a bit of the words and meaning was lost and the focus was put on the rhymes.. however after re-reading it the wording was very good and showed a great deal of emotion which you let out beautifully... nice job :D

Molly Elizabeth ( F P C ) at 2007-07-16

Wow, I love this poem... you always word everything so well... The flow is amazing...everything is just great about this poem, I definatly give you a 5/5! Beautiful :-)

JaMeS ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-18

Alot of meaning locked inside that well done mate

Hopal McFarlane ( C D ) at 2007-07-19

Superb!! I just Love it.. "Could you open your heart and risk love's deceit?
Or would you lick your wounds, accept defeat?"I think right now am actually accepting the defat, but just for now, until I regain some strength. We all like to write love poems about heartche and pain, but very few have managed to do this so effectively.. You're poem actually make sense and I can relate to it.. So of us in our attempts to make our poems rhymes just fail in bringing forth a poem that is meaningful, but as I said you were managed to do all of that. Great work.

playful*plaze* ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-06

Good poem

Gerard Kurt ( C ) at 2007-08-07

Your poems are amazing really. The rhymes are perfect.

Somber Esprit ( C D ) at 2007-08-29

I really liked it. it's well written and easy to read. good flow. i love the style.

crissy abalos at 2007-10-24

Nice poem u have..i like the words u used in it.take care

Suicidal ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-31

Wonderful job...I loved this! Beauitful imagry and well written....amazing piece. It rymes perfectly.....pullls you right in and creates a picture while you read it...I'll give this a 5/5! Keep it up!

AblissfulDREAMER ( F C D ) at 2007-11-22

Oh my .. this was just wonderful!

I loved how the beginning of each stanza, was a question. It really got me to think about the hardships I have encountered in love. Each word you spoke, was simply easy for me to relate with. You took a topic many know, but you made it your own. I think, many have to go through loves obstacles, to learn from them and not make the same mistakes twice. Well done. it was a great read. *5/5*

krae at 2010-06-25

I love this poem. Amazing.

BJeter at 2012-06-09

Been there..done that..luv it!!

sahar alameddine at 2012-06-16

This one is a master piece totally enjoyed reading this one bravo !

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