Comments - Together as One

ICE f0rg0tTeNph0eNix ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-15

I agree that this one is a sweet poem but can't find any reason why i can't find the sweetness in it nor didn't touched my heart..sorry. But i love on how you put a colored and describe the background, i mean the imagination, was wonderful.. anyway, good job! keep it up

XxMExX ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-15

Well done. Extremely ..beautiful, and wonderful poem. To tell you the truth, this is probably one of the best poems I've ever read. EVER. I believe this was written from the heart, and it takes a true poet to write a poem like this. It takes an ever better one to make me, yes ME, see whats going on. As I read it, I could just see everything. And sad to say, I cried. Let me tell you if you don't keep writing poetry like this, I'm gonna get very mad at you marc, haha. Seriously though, keep it up.

fragile soul ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-15

This was such a sweet and beautifully written poem. and the ending was so beautiful. well written. you have a way with putting words together and making something beautiful, just like this. great job.

shade127 at 2007-08-15

Again, very beautiful yet sad. Your writing is very well and you use lots fo imagery..i like that:)

Br0KeN aNgEL ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-15

Aww!!!! This is a beautiful poem!!! Its so sad!!! I almost cried!! Very well written, and expressed!!!! I loved it!!!!!! Gr8 job!!!
Defnitely 5/5 =D
Take care!

Vanessa ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-18

Cartured my attention, and my heart, beautiful written, vivid imagery, strong emotion this one is my favorite by you so far, one of the best poems I have read all night. 5/5

kitkat girl ( F C ) at 2007-08-20

This is a very sweet poem.
I really like the ending,
"She said, "I will never leave your side.."
Together we will depart this world.. Never to be apart.."
keep writing.

Artistic Fallen Angel ( F P ) at 2007-09-29


Dan aka Dan Ni ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-14

Suddenly tears run down her angelic orbs.
The whole place was full of candles and red roses.
And there right in front of her a piece of paper.
"My heart will always and forever belong to you"

that was a great stanza and it made me want to cry.. keep writing and great work

kasia ( F C ) at 2007-11-04

Woow very good poem i really liked it and how you wordded it isi can tell it came from your hart

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-21

Oh my, this makes me want to cry! its so beautiful! such an amazing love story.. 5/5

gothicpoet ( F P C ) at 2008-05-10

That was well written!!..

Keep up the good work!>.


Sourav ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-01

Very well written poem. Very romantic. Lines are very touchy and good. Thanks for sharing.

m3nDIgA ( P ) at 2008-08-27

I like dis poem its so true bt yet so elegant. I like d meaning. Man wat ppl do 4 love right, crazy

dirtyhands ( C ) at 2008-09-28

Mukhang inluv ka ka pardz ah,,
lufet mo tlga!
proud to be pinoy!

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