Comments - Wait For You

PygmyPuff ( F P C D ) at 2009-03-25

Wow... I'm in love with this poem. Maybe its because I feel I can relate to it so much, or maybe its because you did such an awesome job at placing images in the readers' minds. The last stanza sets it off a bit, since the structure is semi-ridgid until then, but it doesnt NEED to be changed, its awesome how it is.

christine ( C ) at 2009-06-20

Love it(:
great job.

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