Comments - Ending Her Cries

Ali at 2008-01-17

Amazing. one of the best poems i have ever read. Im sure a girl would be lucky to have you:)

IVORI at 2008-01-18


Neil Marsden ( P ) at 2008-01-20

I really like this piece of work,particularly the twist in the middle, not where I was expecting it to go - gosh I do like a good surprise!
Well Done! Neil.

Sierra at 2008-01-24

as a narrative poem in itself I love it.
but stating that you ended her cries by initially DYING makes no sense to me.
it gives the emotion that he meant nothing to her and contradicts its integrity.

I love the emotion fluttering within your head though!

Quiet Storm ( C D ) at 2008-01-24

I love this poem, i wish guys were more like you. Keep up the good work, and please read some of mines you might be able to relate.

mheimhei at 2008-01-25

.,oh my god.,the moment i read it i feel the sadness.,soo nice..

Pamela G ( F P C ) at 2008-01-25

It's interesting, I like how you start and end with the surprise ending.

JEFF ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-25

It had an ending i didn't see coming.
great poem.

Ashlenmari at 2008-02-01

Omg you are so good at writing poems man was that real?? i cryed lol

kocoa ( F D ) at 2008-02-05

Wow this is a really good poem. It kind of reminds me and my x-boyfriend. Because he used to be someone that i can talk to whenever i really needed. So heck yea you got my vote (5)!!!

Kristen at 2008-02-05

Love itt!!!! ahhh so good
i actually almost cried ahha

c 0 n f u s e d ( F C D ) at 2008-02-07

This poem is AMAZING! it was touching.. and i totally loved it.

Morgan Layne at 2008-02-08

Love your poem!

i saw your name..
and i know someone named
tyler macdonald..

candice at 2008-02-08

Good work

jessie ( C ) at 2008-02-09

This is what every girl dreams about a guy feeling for them....not the end though it is very heart breaking. I am a sucker for happy endings, though the unpredictable ones are great too. I hope you continue to write such poems in the future.

Cassandra at 2008-02-10

This poem is excellent.. I Love it.. awesome job on it.. and keep up the good work..

Sarah ( F P C ) at 2008-02-11

This is fantastic, you have a real sense of passion that you have intergrated really well into this poem, i like it very much
Sarah -xo

TearsFallingForOnlyYou ( F ) at 2008-02-11


soooo sweet and sad at the same time

ash uh lee at 2008-02-12

Aw this is so cute<3
very good:)

Daniyell at 2008-02-13

Love love love it
it was so emotional and touching
i cried like you have some awesome
talent kid !

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