Comments - But That Time

ღ τιŋy ђєąяτ ღ ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-02

This is a wicked cute poem, if i had written it it'd prolly be my fave too. it sint wonderfully written or has great imagery, but in its simplistic nature it rocks. it could be better, it could have more details or better language, and could have been longer but i like the symbolism and the poem, and i think it deserves a 4.7, so im rating it a 5.

``Tiny Heart~~

*i*Wish*I*Was*Perfect* ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-03

Hey i know why its your favourite, its really well written! great job 5/5 love mel

♥ .J.є.ѕ.ѕ.у. ♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-03

Hmm.. I personally think that some of your other poems are better than this one Goran.. The flow was okay but could be improved.. The descriptions were nice but not great.. It was still a nice poem, but I definetely like your others better.. Nice job though 4/5

Landon Carter at 2006-09-04

Indeed! this was amazing! Keep writing. :-)

donna ( F C D ) at 2006-09-09

'We have hope for a happy tomorrow,
Even if today we live through pain.'

Such an inspiring message.. Another beautifully written poem.. All Your poems are filled with emotions and so very well written.. Well done again on a wonderful poem 5/5 xx

lia ( C ) at 2006-09-13

Beautifuly written.
awsome job.
plz read and commit one of mine it would mean alot to me

.ღ.sarah.ღ. ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-14

And this should be your favorite poem. It is perfectly penned and wonderful! Your words are so strikingly beautiful!!! How many times must I say it?! Keep it up! xxx

Courtsey girl ( P ) at 2006-09-14

Good golly gosh! (lol) all your poems engulf me with how much emotion you put in them!! i love all of your poems! 5/5 from me again!!

catherine ( C D ) at 2006-09-16

You should be proud of that poem. It is short, but it gets to the point. I thoroughly like this one.

Vino ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-17

I see why it's your favorite. It's freakin awesome. You're great at love poems. I wish mine were like this lol. 5/5

Emma Brown ( F C ) at 2006-09-18

OMG! That is totally amazing. I loved it very much. I love all your work but this is one of the best pieces, 5/5.

Love Emma xxx

ScreenplayOfDesire ( F C D ) at 2006-09-22

All of your poems are very good.. the ones I have read at least. But this one.. posesses a different meaning. I loved the flow and emotion. Nice work with this one, it is the best so far.

Dana ( C ) at 2006-09-28

Something about this poem really aroused my senses...I don't know what...but it's just really beautiful. The diction was perfect...and just amazing! definatly a 5/5 from me!

You`re my EVERYTHING♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-29

Wow this is defiantly really good && i like it a lot. you are such a great writer. i hope you dont ever stop. 5/5

sarah at 2006-10-01

Hi im sarah and i like your poem too are you 21 year old? and thanx for commenting my poem

JoAnna ( P ) at 2006-10-05

Hey i like this poem alot and thankz for leaving me a comment on my poem!!!!

X2892 ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-10

WoW it was very good poem u have here 5/5

Lutu ( C ) at 2006-10-11


♥*| i love you|*|4♥Ever|*♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-28


GREAT POEM! Its my favorite poem too!

XxFallenxFromxGracexX ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-03

Excellent poem!!! like all of yours!!! well written and emotional!! well done
Luv FallenxFromxGrace

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