Comments - Forever and Always

Mousie ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-18

Now THAT was beautiful! that's more like it! that almost brought tears to my eyes, and certainly did give me the chills. you know what makes up a good poem, i don't need to sit here and tell you. wonderful job on this poem 5/5

Cassandra Wojick ( C ) at 2007-02-02

Ever sweet, i love it

kgirl at 2007-02-09

OMG! You are such a good writer! That was beautiful. So do You Have A Girlfreind? If you don't you should because u sound like such a sweet guy.

wheezie7489 ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-09


Jess ( F P C ) at 2007-05-22

Wow!!!! this is a beautiful peom. Keep up the good work. 5/

AblissfulDREAMER ( F C D ) at 2008-04-29

The title was beautiful. So simple yet filled with so much meaning. I loved your opening stanza because it just lured me into this beautiful scene and I was eager to read more because you described the emotions flawlessly. The flow of this was so fluid and everything seemed to come so naturally for you which was enjoyable to read. I loved how you ended it because it completed the scene nicely. Well done *5/5*

Adriana at 2008-06-24

Aww tats soo cute

Ian ( F C ) at 2010-04-20

I need a tissue Lol. Great poem. I loved it.
reminds a little of how I am

Ian ( F C ) at 2010-05-11

Awesome. i love this poem. great writing and choice of words to rhyme.

DGAF Hate on it ( F P C D ) at 2010-12-12

Beautiful! i love this poem its amazing.. ur a great poem.. keep up the good work!

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