Comments - I WISH*

Diamondz ( F ) at 2008-05-26

I really like this poem

cryNOmore at 2008-06-05

I love this. how you are objects that arent just surrounding her but you are on her always.

Mr Darcy I Delete I ( F P C D ) at 2008-08-19

Cassanova, I like your name (:

This a real day dream type poem, one I must confess I have dreamt of too!!

It kinda reminds me of a song by Brian Adams, called 'The only thing that looks good on you is me' I think its a great concept!

Anyway, personifying yourself as varying items belonging to your lover is a real tribute of your love for them. I must say what I read the pants reference my mind boggled!!

Great jog and one you should be proud of. I hope she loved it too!!

Welcome to the club :)


Jessica ( F C ) at 2008-09-08

Incredible! that was so sweet and unique. i've never read anything like this. i'm sure the person this poem is about would be more than flattered. i love it. definite 5!

grace ( F C ) at 2008-09-10

Omg i so love this poem! like out of every poem on this site..this is my fav!! 5/5!! =)

Paige ( F C ) at 2008-09-15

Wow, amazing :)

Arun Khan ( F P C ) at 2008-09-19

This was really well written, loved the theme.. must say, a piece of art... 5/5
Regards Arun.

SashaMirage ( F P C ) at 2008-12-13

Wow, you really expressed how much you desire to be with this girl very well. I really enjoyed reading it. 5/5

clare demecillo at 2012-11-07


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