Comments - To My Unborn Child...

livvie7 ( F ) at 2005-07-18

that was a great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i can tell your a good writer!!!!

Mrs.Madden at 2005-07-18

I love this poem.I'm so happy that you love your unborn child sooo much.I hope that when I'm ready to have a family that my man will love his un born child just as much.

Kirsty Koo at 2005-07-18

I feel obliged to comment on this poem just to make it 100 comments instead of was very good *salutes*

Love Koo

Sprouty at 2005-07-18

That was absolutely amazing...

Razorblade ( F C ) at 2005-07-18

Aww. Lol I hate that 'word' so it means a lot when I say it.

That was beautiful!


Barbara at 2005-07-18

A great poem. Really touched my heart

Tasha at 2005-07-18

I thought that it was a GREAT poem. I am 14 and I am trying to concieve, for my own personal reasons. On the other hand you expressed the love a father should have for their child, even if it is not present and in his arms at the moment.

Jenna at 2005-07-18

OMG THIS POEM MADE ME CRY!!!!!!!!!! thats soooo sweet. Your a really good poet and never let anyone tell you dfiferntly...IS it true.....If so CONGRATS!!!!!!!! just remember no matter what happens put your son first in your life and always take time out of your day to teach him to ride a bike and play catch

Jacqueline Rose at 2005-07-19

That was a really good poem. it made me cry, i was pregnant with twin boys just recently and i had sooo much planned for them and i loved them more then anything but when i was 6 months pregnant they passed away. Cherish every moment u have with ur son wheather he is in the womb or not b/c u never know when time will run short.

Tina at 2005-07-19

wow this is very good. I hope you have a wonderful life with your son I am having a blast with mine and he has just turned one.

Alicia at 2005-07-19

I am so impressed, i honestly thought that was such a thoughtful beautiful poem. It was so carefully done, and it flowed so well. I believe that every word should have its place, and it definitly did. I loved it, and you are a really good writer, keep it up. And this is an incredibly sweet thing, if your not already taken ... there are MILLIONS of women searching for a man like you .. to open doors for them and put them first ... and write poems.. its incredibly sweet.

hayley at 2005-07-19

congrdulations on your son thats on the way. hope he brings youas much joy as you anticipate.
good luck!

alyssa at 2005-07-19

thats a really great poem. i hope ur son turns out just like that. good luck

~!*Ashleigh*!~ at 2005-07-19

it was a great poem !i really enjoyed reading it !!

mkhoviyeun ( F C D ) at 2005-07-19

great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5! =)

hilary ( F ) at 2005-07-20

holy piss that was good. do u rele have an un born son?

xand at 2005-07-20

nice! hmm.... you'll be a great dad for sure!!! God bless!!!

Avellana ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-20

wow, *speechless* lv A, x

Daphne at 2005-07-20

Wow what an amazing poem for you son. He will be Blessed to have such a loving father as you. Should be more fathers like you out there and the world would be a much better place. With a fathers love such as yours he will have everything a child should need. 5/5 Daphne

sarah harrhy ( F P C ) at 2005-07-20

omg ,thats an amaing poem ! have u really got a kid on the way if so , congrats :) teach him the ways of the world :) sarah x x x x

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