Comments - A Prayer Before Sleeping

rUby rOse at 2007-11-25, so nyc..speechless..!!=P

shantavia ( F P C ) at 2008-01-05

This is the most beautiful touching praying poem i had ever read i love it and hope your prayer would be fulled

love ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-18



MaryAnne Skora ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-31

Beautifully written, that was so sweet. 5/5

c 0 n f u s e d ( F C D ) at 2008-02-24

Good job!

Lost serenity at 2008-03-24


Nalesha at 2008-05-31

A beautiful and touching poem

Vanessa Reyes at 2008-07-25

.u should keep on writing

Heart Locket ( F C ) at 2008-12-16

"A girl I can call my heavenly dove
who nicknames me Boyfriend and Big Papa Love"

Guh! lol, that had me rolling! But I have to agree with so many others, this poem, like all of yours, is just a 5 star piece! It flows so well and is easy to follow with such a sweet message. I love reading anything from you.


Hope you never stop writing!

christine ( C ) at 2009-01-10

Wow.. i absolutely love that.
its awesome :]

Aubrey ( F P C D ) at 2009-03-10

"Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray for a woman who'll love me deep"

That was a good way to start out. Very Cute.

"With sparkling eyes and silky hair
who knows my faults and doesn't care"

Everyone wishes for someone like that.

"who will watch my movies and put on a smile
who will take my word with out a trial"

no arguments. Perfect.

"the kind of girl who's wild but sweet
who's heart and mind can never be beat"

Well i want that but with a guy :)

"who knows what she wants and how to ask
no games, no lies, or truth covering masks"

you have an amazing talent for writing.

"who loves to have fun and isn't a tease
and a single red rose puts her mind at ease"

sometimes having a mate that teases is a good thing just not all the time lol

"who can look into my eyes and know that it's true
when I hold her tight and say I love you"


"who can touch my face and know how I feel
who doesn't take bull and gives it to me real"

blunt person. just like my boyfiend.

"Who can stand up tall on her own two feet
but can still dance with me in the middle of the street"

that is so sweet. amazing.

"Who will cry on my shoulder when she is pain
But I can wash it all away with a kiss in the rain"

u r truly a great writer.

"who lets me watch sports and loves to watch too
who just wants me not expecting I do"

well if u said all that. wouldnt that be a perfect girl for you too marry?
A girl I can call my heavenly dove
who nicknames me Boyfriend and Big Papa Love"

This made me crack up. Cute.

"who knows that I'm hers and knows that she's mine
who loves to be silly and have a good time"

very cute.

"who holds her breath when I kiss her slow
who's graceful not flashy but her beauty still shows"

this is probably my favorite stanza. its perfect.

"Who thinks just living is the greatest thrill
And knows that I love her and always will"


"Now I lay me down to sleep
I promise to love her and thats a promise I'll keep"

perfect end.

"If you grant my prayer I'll be the envy of men
Thank you my Lord, good night and Amen"


Aubrey ( F P C D ) at 2010-10-18

Adorable :) 5/5

Carissa at 2011-10-04

Im speechless. This was so beautiful. It literally made my heart beat fast. Amazing poem ! (:

Dark Love at 2012-02-02

WOW!!! That was so sweet. I hope that your prayer is answered :)

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