Comments - The poet's heart.

Jo Anna ( F P C ) at 2007-11-24

This poem puts the best poets to shame.You have a truely amazing gift.I cried the first time i read it the second time i simply couldnt read it all the tears were bloking my view.Only true beauty brings tears.

Sammie ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-25

I really like how you changed the view of this poem around like how it went from me, to he to him. and such. i think this poem is very creative and the word choice is flawless. i love every word of this poem amazing job. theres nothing else to say. i love it.

nufia at 2007-12-15

Wow . this is simply amazing . the words fit in perfectly .

Daniel Patrick ( F P C D ) at 2007-12-23

OMG, this one hit so close to home that I teared up like 3 times trying to read it. Even had to light a cigarette because it was like looking into the doorway of my soul and having you read it back to me.

kati ( F C D ) at 2007-12-30

This was amazing...its so beautiful!! 5/5 from me

Beautiful Nightmare ( F P C ) at 2008-01-09

Abosolutely beautiful. 'Nothing is wanted more than the ability to be remarkable'-William Shakespear
i think in these words you attained that ability.
well done:)

Farah ( F ) at 2008-01-10

This poem is absolutely b e a utiful i love it

Neil Marsden ( P ) at 2008-01-20

Beautifully crafted and full of emotion and provocative thought.
Nice one!

Neil Marsden ( P ) at 2008-01-20

A truly magnificent piece of work!
Enough said!


c 0 n f u s e d ( F C D ) at 2008-01-24

I enjoyed reading it..
nice work!

xo kisses xo ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-27

Wow. this poem is breathless! i love the rhythem. i couldn't take my eyes off of my computer screen! this is am amazing poem! 5/5

xo kisses xo

kaitlyn s at 2008-02-02

This is an amzaing poem, very nice.

kocoa ( F D ) at 2008-02-05

This poem was very interesting and touching to me... It was heartfelt
your really good at writing and expressing yourself in words. Big 5 4 U!!

Gizmo ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-07


BrokenHearted ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-08

WOW! Did you write this yourself?? That was completely amazing

Jennifer Dziak ( F P C ) at 2008-02-08

This was THE most beautiful poem i've read in months.

you are very inspiring.

jessie ( C ) at 2008-02-09

This is a great poem and it does tell a beautiful story. It's one of the best I've read.

Sarah ( F P C ) at 2008-02-10

That is amazing.
extremely talented poet, you are
keep it all up
sarah -xo

sarah at 2008-02-13

I dont even know you but i feel like you read my heart. your poem touced me in a way that only true poetry can. thank you

kate at 2008-02-14

Very good transitions

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