Wish It Was Real(lyrics)

by Michelle18

[Verse 1]

Lets take a walk down the road
The road i've been up and down
No ones ever even there
Just old feelings i have found

But in my dreams
When i close my eyes at night
Its you i see
Your image comes in sight

And I...

[Chorus]

Lose my breath
I stop and stare
You kiss my lips
I'm left without a care

I wish it was real
I love the way i feel

When you hold me tight
On the hood of your car
Lay side by side
Counting each shining star

I wish it was real
I love the way i feel.

[Verse 2]

I open my eyes
To another day
When i wish i was asleep
Dreamin' the day away

But here i am again
With my head hung to the ground
Missing those old days
When you'd always come around

And I would....

[Chorus]

Lose my breath
I stop and stare
You kiss my lips
Im left without a care

I wish it was real
I love the way i feel

When you hold me tight
On the hood of your car
Lay side by side
Counting each shining star

I wish it was real
I love the way i feel.

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this is more like a country song. i dont know i have my own beat to it.and ive sung it many ways but the last way sounded the best. i cant sing on here though grr. i wish i could lol.

 

Submission date : 2008-06-23
Last edit : 2008-06-24

Visits : 10770
Votes : 25
Rating : 5.0

Latest comments

Robin Moreno at 2008-07-04

Wow. I really like these lyrics. They portray sooo much emotion, but at the same time...it is something everyone else can relate to! Great job! 5/5

shattered but not broken ( F C D ) at 2008-07-07

This is the kind of song you'd find a lot of people singing inside of their heads. if you're lucky, you can get a job as a song writer. you're really talented. i think your song would sound much better if you sang it the way it was supposed to be sung, because some of the words were a little bumpy, but they might sound better when sung by the writer. overall great job 5/5

Ash ( F P C ) at 2008-07-13

WOW! This is amazing! I mean you can get so many different beats to it but still it's just "WOW". Really I'm so speechless I cannot even comment on this poem.

It's perfect in every sense. Flow was good and you conveyed exactly what you felt. There was a good shift between sadness/ loneliness and love.

Simply a marvelous masterpiece! 100/5

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-14

Very nice ryhthm and rhyme i would love to hear it sung
5/5

XambersherrellXlove doesnt love ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-15

This surprisingly brought tears to my eyes because last night I had a dream that my ex && I were back together.We just recently broke up about 2 months ago after we dated for 2 years.I was engaged to him && everything but,one night he just got mad && broke things off with me...it still hurts.5/5

--amber--



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