Would you fall in love with me

by Tigerdan

Would you fall in love with me
If you looked my way
Allow me to steal the time away

Would you fall in love with me
If you heard my heart play a sweet melody on my
guitar
Saw inside, a bright heavenly star

Would you fall in love with me
If you gazed into my eyes
Saw that my skin, was only a disguise

Would you fall in love with me
If you noticed my arms opened wide
To capture your unsuspecting love inside

Would you fall in love with me
If you were to kiss me today
Would you allow me to take your breath away

 

Submission date : 2008-10-26
Last edit : 2008-10-31

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Latest comments

Twist Of Fate ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-01

Lol i like the change it is very good

christine ( C ) at 2008-11-02

I LOVE this.
great job! :]

still madly in love with him ( F P C ) at 2008-11-02

AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! soo cute

Goth marionette ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-03

What a wonderful title!!..
I think if anyone was given such a poem,She would fall in love wz u;);)..
I liked the repetition that u used and I think the flow was good..
Great job;)
Keep it up;)5/5

NELLIE at 2011-06-27

Oh yes totally ..lol :)



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