Fly with me (Concrete Form)

by Golden anGel Rhapsodist

Fly With
Y o u
N o matter
How far. Even the
sky may appear light
or dark.
And as long as I can see that sparks
the map will, be marked.

Worlds 7 wonders, Don't make any blunders. S h o w the world , how we LOVE
each other please,
Hold my hand let's do t h i s.
F l y With


Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.


A try of a concrete poetry

All rights reserved 2016----


Submission date : 2016-09-03
Last edit : 2016-10-06

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Votes : 5
Rating : 5.0

Latest comments

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-05


thanks even this writing gave you a headache. ... actually in my laptop it looks different. I dunno why ....Been editing this in notepad and Ms word. .. The problem is, when I transferred it here....anyway thanks you made it ...hahahhahahah. .


Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-05

Very cool! I liked this a lot- these concrete poems are difficult, well done-

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-05

Hi Brenda,

thanks for having time reading my poem. ...

have a blessed day. .


Autumn Breeze ( C D ) at 2016-09-09

Ate Gel. Kmasta ka

This is very nice poem, I really liked the first segment. I will give you some suggestions related to your poems later. But you are doing very nice. Gel

Loved the flow and rhythm of this lovely write.

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-09

Hi Lil Bro,

I'm fine (ikaw kumusta)? hope you're doing great. .. yes dear you give your comments, suggestions, observations and violent reaction. ...hahaha feel free

Ate Gel.

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