You are my Academic

by Golden anGel Rhapsodist

Add up all the love, care, fidelity and loyalty
Subtract all the hate, grudge, and negativity,

Divides time to all of my house chores
Cast the signs in every corner, inside and outdoors,

Multiply trust, respect, and patience
You are the solution in any of my problems.

You are the brain, helps to function everything,
The lungs, the cause why I'm still breathing,

Ears, which notes all your suggestions
Mouth that sealed in each hard situations

The heart, that's why I know how to love,
Eyes, behold that you are enough.

You, yes you,

You're always my Leonardo Da Vinci,
Your favorite Madonna? That would be me.

A lyrics that rhymed in every melody,
Lines perfectly fit in every poetry.

Mozart, Bach,Pachelbel , or even Beethoven
None of them can compare with you. None of them.

Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.



Submission date : 2016-09-09
Last edit : 2016-10-06

Visits : 963
Votes : 8
Rating : 4.8

Latest comments

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Oh thanks for the wonderful feedback.I'm so glad you like it

Nicolette at 2016-09-18

I really like how you've incorporated many aspects within one compact poem, love it!

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Hi Nicolette ,

Thanks for having a good time reading my poem. :)


Bradley Peter ( F P C ) at 2016-09-20


First off: the title. Wonderfully intriguing. Secondly, I thought the layout was witty and fun. And thirdly, I was very pleased to see such interesting choices in wording. I find so many people re-use the same old words, but here it looks like you've tried to break free from that.



P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every piece you read.

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-20

Hello Brad,

thanks for the comment.
and yes, if I like what I read, I drop down a comment or suggestion. But if I don't like,I rather not quote the piece. I don't want to hurt someone's feeling.

Thank you so much for reminding me
have a bless day. :)


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