Speechless Dreams

by Naughtymouse

Authors note: Even if you don't normally, please read aloud.

I dream of just
sitting with you
in fields of corn with
a warm summer
as you trace the lines
on the back of my hands,
your fingers,
as delicate as your smile,
feel like silk
and there is something,
in your touch,
that I cannot put into words.....

Without even realising you leave me speechless.


Submission date : 2016-09-28
Last edit : 2016-09-28

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Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-29


Very nice piece. .. I always do this to my husband. ..tracing the lines at the back of his hands... I thought it's just me...This poem made me smile. .:)
a5/5 for this


Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-29

Ben, you guys and your love poems, this is just lovely, the visuals have left me speech less. So well done-

Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-29

A lovely, lovely poem, Ben. And yes, for your information, I did read it aloud!

Take care,


Maple Tree ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-29

I read this out loud... its really pretty! You always know how to swoon the heart!

Just lovely

Naughtymouse ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-29

Thaaankyou guy's so much :) i gotta admit, there's something I like about this one :)

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