Swerve and curve

by Brookie

Love is patient, love is kind
love will surely leave you by design
So be sure to keep an open mind
be sure you see the sign

Drive fast and far
don't forget you are who you are
The lines drift left then right
try to focus using your might

It isn't a simple game
don't forget love isn't a right
So don't stay in, don't be lame
forgetting the whole world lacks your might

Stay true at heart
For life is for sure nothing but an art.

By Josh -

We had poem night, so we all wrote poetry under my account and im going to send the comments to them if anyone does <3


Submission date : 2016-09-29

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Latest comments

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-01

Brookie, another really nice poem. Josh did a really good job with the format and the subject and how he put it into words. Lots of food for thought-well done-

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-02

Josh did a fantastic Job. I enjoyed the swift changes in the rhyming and what he says is true we must love but never forget ourselves in the process.