Whisper Among Stars

by Naughtymouse

Like an incandescent waterfall,
the fires that burn within
burst into a display
of heat and light
as we become one breath.

Looking deep in her eyes,
into her soul,
I watch our love unfold
before us like a spellbound,
celestial path,
the strongest
of all connections.

A paralyzing essence
that is so exquisite.

I have come to find a tranquillity
there, a shelter in her touch,
melting my tears from ice
and evaporating them
into the stars,
only to feed the birth
of a new Sun.

And my heart rests easy....

Whether night or day,
time is irrelevant.
Only now...this time matters,
with her, my love.

The whisper of her
love thunders
through me like an
earthquake, originating
in that delicate smile
radiating between
us to a faultless
crescendo in
my very soul.

She leaves me breathless
when she looks at me with
those eyes.

Like I've run a thousand miles.

Loss of, cognitive function,
Like some serenely perfect drug...

And, already I know,
as sure as the moons
and planets that surround me...

We will stay, yes, we will stay.


Submission date : 2016-10-05
Last edit : 2016-10-06

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Votes : 9
Rating : 5.0

Latest comments

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-10

Ben, Congratulations on your win, it truly is a lovely poem. Well done-

Naughtymouse ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-10

Thankyou guys :)

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-11

Ben the 2nd,

hahaha ....when it comes to great piece The name Ben really stands out...I should change mine. ..lol

Congratulations for the win

ether ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-11

This covers so many areas - or should I say elements: water, fire, ice, air, earth, stars. None of this felt forced, it flowed so elegantly and tied in together beautifully. Congratulations xo

Naughtymouse ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-11


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