I miss you daddy

by Erinn

Daddy why'd you have to leave me,
all alone here,
so broken and hurt inside,
with so many fears

I was only seven,
and sissy was only two,
we'll both have to grow up,
missing and wishing to be with you

It was seven in the morning,
when mommy woke me up,
and told me daddy was killed,
by a crazy man with a gun

Two years later,
I found out the man had been drinking,
he took my daddy away,
without even thinking

Cause if he had been thinking,
he wouldn't have took my sweet daddy away,
but i still have hope,
that I'm gonna see him again in heaven one day

Its been 8 years,
I still think about him all the time,
but i still don't see,
why someone could commit such a crime.

This is a true story... I lost my dad by a man who was drunk and had a gun.. The man didn't go to jail/prison. I'm 15 now and my sister is 10 we still think about him everyday. i would really appreciate It if you would vote and comment! thanks.. Oh and i know i sorta should go under sadness/death but i lost a loved one so i thought it would fit better under lost love

 

Submission date : 2005-06-09

Visits : 38242
Votes : 1214
Rating : 4.7

Latest comments

Cynthia Porter at 2007-05-01

I love and feel your pain IM SORRY for you about your dad with all do and respect i give my blessing to your dad.

J.B.Heart at 2007-06-07

I know kinda how you feel. I lost my dad when I was 12. good poem tho.

Kenny ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-01

Nice poem! Love It!!

What Else Can I Do ( F P C ) at 2007-10-11

Omg im sorry this happened to you and your sister... i hope you guys are doing better... well you must be because you are 17 already but just because you grew doesnt mean you are doing better, so im sorry if you aint. i wish you the best of luck with you family eventhough my comment is kind of late. im sorry for your loss!! 5/5

Jaime ( D ) at 2008-08-07

OMG i am so sorry for your lose. i know how you feel.



[ View all comments (131) ]