Last Night I Had A Dream

by Just Another Dreamer

Last night I had a dream-
I dreamt I was in his arms.
I simply stood there gazing,
Completely wrapped up in his charms.

The night sky was the deepest blue,
Stars by the thousands gave the brightest glow,
And wind moved soundlessly around us.
The moon-it hung so low.

With his arms wound 'round my waist,
He softly kissed my ear.
"I love you," he whispered.
"I promise that I'll always be near."

As my heart beat badly,
I put my arms around his neck.
Standing on my tip toes,
I went to give him a gentle peck.

Before I got a chance to, he captured my mouth in his-
Our kiss was slow and long.
As he brushed my hair from my face I thought,
"This is exactly where I belong."

He placed his hands, slightly curled, on the small of my back,
And pressed our hips together.
I laid my hands upon his chest.
We stood there dancing, which felt wonderfully like forever.

Slowly it began to rain,
And soon we were drenched- drops dripping from our hair.
He took my chin with his hands and whispered,
"There's something I must share."

"I'll love you for forever."
I've loved you from the start."
"No matter what happens,
You'll always have my heart."

"You mean the entire world to me."
"You're my shinning star-
Because everything I wish for,
Is everything you are."

He took my hands in his,
As he stared at me with a twinkle in his eye.
"You are so beautiful you make the angels envious."
"The rain we feel are tears they cry."

Blushing and smiling I shook my head.
He took my face between his hands and said, "You know it's true."
"You are the point of light amid my darkness."
"The only one I want is you."

There we lay side by side,
Together on the grass.
As he put his arm under my head,
I prayed this moment would never come to pass.


If you guys could comment on this it would be really nice- this is my first poem on here and it would be great if I could hear some feedback. thanks


Submission date : 2005-08-11
Last edit : 2007-07-02

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carlos fernandez at 2008-04-13

Wow this was a great poem i wish i could write things like this. im too much of an amature to have anything this deep. but i feel where your coming from ive had a dream like this aswell.

Singing in the Rain ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-17

Wow, that was amazing! One of the sweetest love poems I read, you had so much feeling and emotion in it, it was just perfect! I really enjoyed reading this, and hope you do keep on writing!

Kimi No Suki Na Uta ( F P C ) at 2008-07-23

Bravo!! this poem is absouletly beautiful in every single way. it was great. so deep and so pure. very heartfelt. simply wonderful to read.

He took my hands in his,
As he stared at me with a twinkle in his eye.
"You are so beautiful you make the angels envious."
"The rain we feel are tears they cry."

i loved that stanza especially the very last line. very powerful, and it held so much meaning. this poem was truly one of my favorites. a lovely piece of work. job well done. 5/5.


cZaRiNa ( F P C ) at 2008-10-03

That was nicely written..keep it up..5/5 ^_^

LittleMsPink ( F P C D ) at 2012-10-01

Such a sweet poem

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