I Love You

by ThugPoet

The depth of your eyes, the words no man could ever speak
Your essence, your very presence makes me weak
The comfort of your body, the warmth of your soul you emit
You practically melt my heart the moment we kiss
And the first moment we did, I knew that I loved you
Yeah I'm a guy but I could have cried when you said you loved me too
See I could have held you forever and died that very day
If I'd gone in your arms, I wouldn't want it any other way
You are my life, my death, my beginning & my end
My love, my lady, my baby and best friend
I'm your man; we can go for a walk in the park & hold hands
All things aside, baby I want you to know that I understand
And if I don't, I want you to try & give me a chance,
Let me make it right, take you out to a dinner & dance :p
What ever you want what ever you need, baby I'm there
For you I'll die a thousand deaths to show how much I care
I'm not saying I'm perfect, not even close
But if anyone loves you, I think I'll love you the most
For you I'd fight worlds, or remove every thorn on every rose
Just so I can tickle your cute little nose :p
I love every inch of you, inside and out
When I found you, I found out what my life is all about (K)

*I Love You*


Submission date : 2006-01-01
Last edit : 2007-04-11

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jasmine at 2006-01-06

Great poem...i wish someone would feel the same way for me....your baby is so lucky!

Dani Fitch ( F P C ) at 2006-01-12

Amen. you're awesome! thanks for you're encouragement and inspiration. i feel ur pain but i also feel the joy u have ever felt. i think we've felt similar feelings. keep writing, ur amazing!! bro... haha. ur forgiven..
luv dani xoxo

Gabe at 2006-04-06

Ur an xcellent writer buddy ..dis poem emphasizes on wat i feel right now and has literally looks deep into my soul to reveal wat i actually feel..keep up d gud work mang

Poet ( C ) at 2006-10-17

That wuz kind of deep

♥TinyDancer♥ ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-31

Gaww I want that kind of love. haha

That's such a sweet and beautiful poem. I love your words, they flow together really well!

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