MY Tears

by NIDAL

My Tears reborn.

Sadness weaved in the fabric of my bone.
I am Alone, A king without a Throne.

In the Cold Winter I long.
Asking and hoping for a new Dawn.

My name in your heart torn.
So I will sail home.

Braving the storming seas alone.
Wishing you are with me, but hope forever drawn.

You are my angel, To heaven you flown.
But I hold you near, For in my Tears you're born.

 

Submission date : 2006-06-16
Last edit : 2006-06-17

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N M Lambert ( F C ) at 2007-05-09

"in my tears you are born"

so beautifully put x

Elizabeth Ann ( F P C ) at 2007-07-09

That made me think of Odyseus's voyage; he ended up alone but for the end, when he was at the mercy of his wife's fidelity.

The language and the verse was indeed, as so many said before me, beautiful. You certaintly have command over your words.

Viola x MyBrokenSmile x ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-11

This is beautifully written. the way the emotion was expressed is so amazing. a sad but compelling poem. great job! =]

noha ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-22

Its realy good so much feeling

xXCaNdYgUrLxX at 2008-10-04

Wow i really like this..
AMAZING



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