Before you

by BlueDreams

Before you, there was only just one heart,
Ever searching, always reaching, but never finding.

Before you, there was only just one soul,
Ever seeking, always yearning, and but never resting.

Before you, there was only just one thought,
Ever striving, always wanting, but never fulfilling.

Before you, there was only just one life,
Ever planning, always hopeful, but never complete.

Before you, there was only just one hope,
Ever lasting, always fleeting, but never achieved.

Before you, there was only just one dream,
Ever longing for, always missed, and never believed.

Then you found me, on wings sent from above.
You taught me life's greatest lesson;
When two hearts merge... it's wonderful love.


Submission date : 2006-07-06
Last edit : 2007-07-07

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Votes : 68
Rating : 4.5

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Mustardhart ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-09

I love this one, tis beautiful and wholistic. Gr8 job keep it up man

Deana ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-13

I really liked the style of this poem different and refreshing. Also beautiful words and emotions.

Robie ( F C D ) at 2006-09-14

I love the style of your poem! this is another beuitifull poem! donno what to say!

Flaminia at 2006-10-18

Quite a good poem,may be a little obvious.I'm saying this because I've just read father's love and...There's no camparison between the two!!!That's why I won't vote this one,because giving that a 5 I would have to give this a three and your average would get lower.The poem flows well and you've got a good writing technique.The theme is though seen too many times.Try something new...You can do it...excellent writer!

~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~ ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-22

Cute poem! i like it! =)

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