Perfect roses

by BlueDreams

These roses for you my love, today
Pink perfection in a long stemmed creation
Fragrant, like a thousand perfumes
Everlasting, eternally blessed
A gift of passion, Trinity
In our love... three elements, given
Faith, Hope and Love
Three precious gifts of light
Our love, undeniable, yet challenged
A world of conflict and separation
Attempting togetherness
Driven by wild attraction, determination
Faith in the possibility, happiness
Living in partnership, sharing
Hope in the future together, fulfilling
Loving, unconditionally, provocatively
Two lives in evolution, sharing
Living in harmony in adversity
Faith, Hope and Love,
These perfect roses for my love

Note; A love that will not go away, Through times, places and a million miles. In generations yet to be, our love will never die....


Submission date : 2006-09-28
Last edit : 2007-05-13

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UnToLd TrUtH ( F C D ) at 2006-10-08

Wow this is great. 5/5

Shattered Heart♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-08

Aww wow i really like tihs poem a lot. very deep and beautiful. you did a wonderful job on it. very well written poem. keep it up! 5/5


FlirtingWithDeath ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-18

I find this poem very soothing for the soul. Wonderful job hun 5/5

Letty.... ( F P C D ) at 2006-11-05

Awwww!!!!!!!!!! This was so beautiful! you really have a way with words. I felt all the deep and strong love and desire that you put into this poem. It really is a magnificent work of art. The flow was wondrful and the words had me feeling like I was in a whirlwind. This poem captured me from the beginning to the end and then it had me wanting so much more. you have done it again my friend, you are just simply amazing. 5/5 Keep writing these beautiful, talented pieces of romance.

Best wishes

LoSt in masquEraDe ( C D ) at 2008-04-25

Lovely poemmmmmmmmmmm

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