I Hate This

by Carisa

I told you to go to hell, clutching the phone to my ear. How could you say those things to me? I was the one who had been there for you. The one who didn\'t turn you away.

I hung up the phone, tears streaming down my face. How could this be? How could my fairy tale end so quickly?

But if I were to look back, I would see that there never was a fairy tale. It was just you and me. So different that we could never work. But I had hoped.

Was it my fault? Was there something that I could have done? Something that would have kept you beside me? That would have prevented us from breaking into a million unfixable pieces?

I have tried to convince myself that we were over before we started, but I can't. I told you not to fall in love with me, but I was the one who was head-over-heels.

So stop writing about how you are a loser, when i am the one who is still holding on to a memory. I\'m the loser.


Submission date : 2006-11-21

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Love Fallacy ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-03

I really liked this piece. Really conveyed emotion . Keep up the good work. If you could, check out some of my work. I think you would really like it. Thank you and nice job.

Your Best Mistake Your Perfect F ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-27

Wow. its been a long time..
what's new ?

Kenny ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-01

Nice poem! Love It!!

Your Best Mistake Your Perfect F ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-16

Hey... How's life ?

imperfectionist ( C ) at 2008-05-30

Nothing is new...just living

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