The Luckiest Guy (PART 4)

by Goran Rahim

Dear the luckiest guy in the world,
It is me, your unknown friend.
The series of these meaningless poems,
Tonight, it is going to end.

Our life has two sides,
One we see, other cannot be seen.
But I am writing about the blind side,
With a soul so clean.

That princess belong to you,
I was wrong, you were innocent.
You had her heart, not me,
That is what makes us different.

She was yours from the start,
But my heart was wild.
Crying for no reason,
Like a new born child.

I was wrong, thinking
There were hidden love in her eyes.
True, there were love,
But for you, with no lies.

Now she is all yours,
You deserve her not me.
As she was telling you she loves you,
She was telling me "there is no we"

Her sweet smile, when hearing your name,
That is what you should admire.
You truly loved her,
Mine was just a desire.

Now you are the luckiest guy,
So am I, now it is all fair.
Yet the reason for my luckiness,
With no one I shall share.

*** please do not judge this poem if you have not read the first three parts.thank you


Submission date : 2006-12-19
Last edit : 2007-04-20

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xo kisses xo ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-14

Omg...this one is soooo sad. it almost made me cry. i can totally relate to this poem. i did this exact thing (execept a guy of course)

Alex ( F C D ) at 2007-06-16

"She was yours from the start,
But my heart was wild.
Crying for no reason,
Like a new born child."

That was beautiful.


Jess ( F P C ) at 2007-08-31

I have read every single one you wrote and i love them all. keep up the good work 5/5


Emily E Mehigan at 2007-09-25

Great Write. I'm still reading more. <3Emily

kIROS DELA VEGA ( P C ) at 2007-10-04

WOW i like this one... really a good and brilliant poem... keep up...

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