Wish That I Were

by Debbylyn

Wish that I were the moon
To softly kiss your sleep
To lie in love beside you
Caress your slumber deep

Wish that I were the stars
To light your darkest night
To hold your heart inside me
A beacon shining bright

Wish that I were the sun
To wash your every day
To color all your sunsets
Warmth that never goes away

Wish that I were the wind
To whisper breaths of love
To send a sigh of ecstasy
Enraptured from above

Wish that I were time
To give back what has passed
To ask for all and nothing
Just to be with you at last

*For Barry


Submission date : 2007-03-22
Last edit : 2007-07-22

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End Of Eternity ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-05

This is just so romantic indeed. loved it all the way. I wish you both be together soon and stay forever.

all the best and take care

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-07

Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5.

PS. plz comment and rate on my poems

Barry ( F C ) at 2007-05-03

You are so.........................

M Douglas Hoss ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-08

So very good...

aDORKable x3 ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-13

This was a beautiful love poem. A lot of love poems these days are very cliched but yours was so...not cliched. lol I could tell that this was written from your heart and that's what made it so beautiful.

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