by BrokenREALiTy

You know the typical teenage girl,
With the shattered cries and defeated pride?
Remember the broken hearts; the many secrets,
And the agonizing pain they try to hide?

It's funny how they're looked down upon;
How much they get yelled at for not letting go.
And what's even more amusing is that I do that now,
When I used to be one of those.

Those little girls with the made-up smiles,
Looking forward to nothing but a fairy tale demise.
Walking around hopeful, with such naivety,
Just to end up with a loved one to despise.

Broken down and tainted; unwilling to love again,
Staggering in agony and drowning in lost hope.
Trying so hard to find the path they've lost,
Attempting with all energy left to cope.

And though I still sit among lost memories,
I've open myself and done what those girls can't.
To slowly reveal the heart inside of me,
And accept the love of another man.
[c] 2O07 Mindy Huang

Does it make sense? I don't know what I was trying to write... It just popped into mind, so I typed it here.


Submission date : 2007-07-03

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MyuhhhBuggg ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-25

Wow hun! this is brilliant! :]
i loved every stanza! great write!
i love your work!

sorry i've been really busy and haven't gotten on here much. miss ya too hun!<3

Anonymous Angel ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-28

I liked your poem, the flow was great, just as great as your vocab:)
Its a poem some people can relate too, like me.. keep up the good work!
kisses stephanie

Finding myself at 2008-05-09

This was good
i could fully understand it

karina ( P ) at 2008-05-27

Koo i liked it

maryann at 2009-11-26

Hey i just found this in my favs I don't remember reading it but i just wna say its amazing and it makes perfect sense :) tc

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