All I can do

by Loved In Hell

The second I looked into your eyes
I was pulled in
The second you spoke
My heart was given

The second we touched
My breath was taken away
But the second you left
My world turned to grey

You made me feel warm
Warm to the touch
The only question I had was
How can I love someone this much

I saw you yesterday
I had so much to say
But all I could do was smile
And let you go your way

Last night I had a dream
Of you and me
We were perfect together
Why couldn't you see
When I am with you
I am set free

You are the only person
Who can make me feel like this
Give me that feeling
The feeling I miss

I want you to realize
That I need you
I am here waiting for the words
"I love you too"

So I sit in my room
And wait
All I can do
Is believe in a thing called fate


Submission date : 2007-09-01

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Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-01

Whoops were allready there

JEFF ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-29

Here We go a style I'm use to. =) beautiful poem, great show of emotion. 5/5

paul ( F P C ) at 2008-03-09

I like this poems how u been

Ritchies Girl at 2008-03-10

This is a great poem. I can relate so much. I was actually crying b4 i read this and this made me cry more but thats not a bad thing. It just means ur a excelent writer. KEEP UP THE WORK.

GoodSarah at 2009-01-08

Just a wonderful poem! lots of relateable emotions!

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