Comments - My Drug

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-25

A sweet little piece with wonderful rhyming.
I hope the person this was intended for read it.


Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-25


It's been along time since I wrote you one
But your a blessing to me

=sweet and romantic lines

The light at the end of the tunnel
When my life was full of tragedy
=strikingly powerful lines

It's a wonderful feeling to know
I feel safe with you
= soft and full of feelings

My addiction to loving you is a drug
I can never give you enough
= I have some suggestions here
My addiction (of ) loving you (,) is a drug.

And my pleasure
is to keep giving you more and more
= already high in love here. ..

All in all this is a lovely piece


Cameo Newton ( P ) at 2016-09-27

Thank you that means the world to me