Comments - What is This?

David ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-14

Oh its love all right. i know you. and thru this poem i am right in saying it is trully love.

5/5 David

xThatxBoyxIsxBeautifulx ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-15

Okay, I must admit. The poem is a bit messy. You could have you used better structure to your poem. The flow was rocky and it is a fixer upper. It just needs a bit of work. Try to have the closest amount of sylables in each lines. Don't take it seriously, just advice. Other than that, it's a cute poem. I don't really read internet slang, but this was cute. But unfortunatly it's not great, just good, so I'll have to give you a 4/5.
God Bless

BoBa ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-15

Yes, my friend, it is love lol. I loved the flow of this and the ending was good, in my opinion. To me its good the way it is. 5/5

CHOKE ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-15

Interestin write.
just remember this "everything happens for a reason"

A Broken Bleeding Soul ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-15

I've felt this way so many times. Great job at getting your emotions through. It really shows. 5/5

~ Tina

Darien ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-15

Hmm, this was more of a sad sort of love poem, sort of like, a confusion. Which is what this poem is about. Being confused about love! I didn't really like the title because it sort of ruined the element of surpised. It was easy to guess what this poem was about. I think you should change the title, and leave the last line to ask the question. It's totally up to you though. Good job on this one though.

isabel ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-15

Loved this poem...
it's beautiful...


Puishan at 2007-04-16

That's what i'm experiencing.
you've shown what you feel inside.
it gives me a deep impression

moonlil ( F P C ) at 2007-04-16

Nice poem.

amanda flood ( C ) at 2007-04-16

Well done very good i agree wit^^^all off them 5-5

~*Hernandez*~ at 2007-04-16

.. agreed.

Amanda at 2007-04-17

I love is poem I think that it has a great massge to it. I also think that it shows how you my not now if your feelings for someone are ture.

Pain in the Darkness ( F P C ) at 2007-04-17

Wow...this is really good poem, but this is how I feel. my opinion is there is no love. yeah...good job.

holly at 2007-04-18

Pretty, it speaks

WANNAbe Juliet ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-19

It could use editing, yes . Was it bad? No . The feeling that is felt in the poem is right there; it speaks to you . I`m not a fan of this poem, but it was good .

Ashleigh Skye ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-21

Aw this poem is so sweet, and yeah thats definatly love.. or it could be a really strong crush im not to sure. Whatever it is.. I really liked the poem idea, VERY creative you got a lot out there without having to say very much. Nice work.

Fire-lilly ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-03

Not bad though I do thin kthat it could be better if you were to work on it a little. Keep up the great work. 4/5