Comments - I pray this will last.

Southern Gal at 2006-09-26

Awww...SWEET!! Great Poem!!

.ღ.sarah.ღ. ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-26

Awww wonderful poem. I feel like I could picture in my head the perfect Kodak moment. Excellent job. Funny how things turn out doesn't it? It just shows, never give up hope. I wish you the best of luck.

Robie ( F C D ) at 2006-09-27

Wooow thats so good! i loved the whole poem! cant choose which part was my fav lol! its amazing you got the talent! awsome\
keep it up!

ღNemOღ ( F C D ) at 2006-09-29

Oh! yay, this is so perfect in the eyes!
so full of emotions and very heartfelt! very breathtaking aswell!

I love your poems and how they print a smile to the face =)
I wasn't in a good mood till I read this poem..oh gosh fantastically written!
I totally love it

thanks for the inspiration!
Keep It Up
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x0x

Bridgette ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-30

Aww.. I love this poem. It's very sweet, It was very beautifully written and it flowed very well. Great job on this! 5/5

sucidedall ( C ) at 2006-10-01

Uh well um this shure was a good poem..
i think it was sweet.
plz read and commit mine as ive done for you..

Angel ( F C D ) at 2006-10-08

BEAUTIFUL! loved it sooo much... can't believe i just read it now... hehe... its a wonderful poem... the flow and rhyme were great... excellent write! keep it up!


Zach ( F P C ) at 2006-10-10

I LOVED THIS! a very inspirational write... thanks for your comment

RainbowSlider ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-15

A very beautiful poem. I loved reading it.

Kristen ( F P C ) at 2006-10-17

Wow, perfect flow, perfect rhyme....PERFECT!

FlirtingWithDeath ( F P C D ) at 2006-10-18

My favorite part was
"I came so close to telling you
But butterflies were my defeat
So I'll hold off on this moment
And let my heart just lead."
I think we can all relate to that =]

Yu Chung Lee ( C ) at 2006-10-20

I love this poem!! It very beautiful. ^-^

Mannosa at 2006-11-12

Again.. good job...
Like how you expressed your self simply!
Keep it up :)

Ashley ( F C D ) at 2006-12-26

One Word: Beautiful.


Yu Chung Lee ( C ) at 2007-01-17

I love this poem ^-^

M Douglas Hoss ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-24

Well done

David ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-16

Now i know why everyone has voted on this poem, it is trully excellent, it was full of love and affection, the words spoke true love.

the flow was outstanding, and the ending was superb, well done.

5/5 David

blackheartslove ( F P ) at 2007-09-25

I have no words for the beauty of this poem. it is simply.......... amazing! i loved reading it!

LoreNz0 ( F C D ) at 2011-12-01

Once again you have taken a moment in my life and caputered it in a poem, and done it so well!
i really love your style of poetry and your obvious talent for it.

yet another amazing read. 5*

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