Comments - Bed Of Blood

Composed Catastrophe ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-24

The last stanza is a sadistic twist! she died but its ok kind of thing idk i love how you did that though : )
great job long poem but i didn't even notice till i had to scroll back up to the top ! you made it flow nicely i hope it isn't true thought : / that would be sad
5/5 of course!

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