Cold Glance

by Ramon G Haupt

Your breakup of us with such torment,
Stabbing me deeply like a sting from a hornet.

Now I still carry on wanting your chance,
Seeing you day by day but I see is a dead glance.

So wherever your heart takes you.
May it be a pleasant journey too.
Your touch, yes, I still yearn,
But your love for me, you made it burn.

 

Submission date : 2016-08-07

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Sir Lancelot ( F P C D ) at 2016-08-08

There is nothing worse than having a love that we lost still haunt us. Seeing the person pass us by on the street with nothing to offer but a 'cold glance'.
I like that - somehow - you have still managed to wish this person all the best, despite the heartbreak they have left you:

So wherever your heart takes you.
May it be a pleasant journey too.

Well done on this,

SL

Ramon G Haupt ( P ) at 2016-08-17

Thank you sir lancelot, yeah I was hit pretty hard, but at the end of the day we just have to move on and continue to celebrate love which most of us yearn to have