Cherry Blossoms (Form - Rhyme)

by Autumn Breeze

Like a robin, beyond the horizon you flew,
Leaving me lonesome in a state of blue.
Now how would I find you, where would I go,
Sans you the glory of my heart is getting low.

Your loving memories will always make me weep;
Have you forgot the promise I had told you to keep.
The promise to glance as one beyond the stars;
To make a new land free from all cruelty and wars.

You are my true love, not a dull game.
Don't you know you were my only flame;
Who had showed me the way towards the fairy land.
Darling, I just want to hold again your hand.

I can't forget those moments spent under the silvery moon.
Darling, I am waiting for you, please come back soon.
I believe we will watch the cherry blossoms fall again;
We will again run up to the hill, to our secret domain.


Inspired by the Japanese Romantic Movie -
5 centimeters per second

- Augustus Black
Date - 30th September 2016


Submission date : 2016-10-01
Last edit : 2016-10-01

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Latest comments

Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-01


This is a lovely poem, indeed, which is melodic throughout and a pleasure to read.
Wistful and lulling, this rhyming piece from you is a real success. Well done, my friend.


Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-01

Hi Augustus,

I agree with Sir Ben. .. This is lovely ...
You rock. .. I love this. ..and I know she will love this also. ..


Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-01

Such a joy to read with beautiful imagery.


Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2016-10-01

Such a lovely poem. I loved the visuals you portrayed. Isn't it funny how things inspire us to write? Well done-