I need you like..

by 6*9lily6*9

I need you like
the earth needs the sun
i need you like
a bullets needs a gun

i need you like
the plants need water
i need you like
a son need its father

i need you like
a human needs air
i need you like
a baby need care

i need you like
a computer needs energy
i need you like
people need Harmony

i love you like
a fat kid loves cake
i love you
like gods forsake

 

Submission date : 2005-04-30

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♥Diana Cardero ©♥ ( F P C ) at 2006-06-11

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♥..GOOD LOOKiiN OUT LiiL HOMii ( F C ) at 2006-08-19

CUTE POEM ..
I LIKES IT

Cassandra Wojick ( C ) at 2007-02-02

Cute poem!

Kenny ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-01

Nice poem! Love It!!

shantavia ( F P C ) at 2008-01-05

I love this poem its very good no not good but excellent wonderful well done



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