by LeAnNe
Submission date : 2003-09-20
Last edit : 2008-05-14
Indie
at 2013-12-11
This is good i enjoyed it but a little tip i mean only if you want it. just remember to flow and not have a poetry line be to much longer than the others. I always have to keep that in mind. I can also relate to this poem. BUt overall it was good. Good job!
Dominique Lewis ( F P C D )
at 2014-01-15
I adore this. It is often hard to express how we truly feel because we are scared of what may happen. I hide from the truth sometimes...the truth that I love him still. It is irritating to keep it inside because you don't want to loose your friend, but you also do have strong feelings for them. :/ 5/5 from me. This is well written and describes the heart's many questions.
Jyoti Rawat ( F P C D )
at 2014-01-27
I read this poem once again.
Really very nice poem in this poem as u describe the feeling, these are true lover feelings.
Olufunke Kolapo
at 2014-08-24
An interesting love piece.
Fiona Rodricks ( F C D )
at 2015-09-13
Good write