Other Than You

by XUnbreakablex

I'm feeling so fragile
My heart's torn in two
Why can't I love somebody
Other than you?

My problems would vanish
My heart would repair
And I would stop wishing
For you to be there

The tears on my pillow
Would cease to exist
And I'd stop dreaming
About those times when we kissed

I'd forget all those memories
And reasons I cried
Forget how you played me
Forget how you lied

But my heart is still broken
And you made it break
Shattered completely
More than I can take

I want to hate you
Make you suffer like me
But I love you too much
So I'm setting you free

Life would be easier
I'd make it through
If I loved somebody
Other than you


Submission date : 2005-05-14
Last edit : 2007-04-19

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Lindsay ( C ) at 2005-05-21

Hey there, this is a really detailed and good poem...its really really good, keep up the good work m8!

Linds x

Alyssa at 2005-05-21

this poem is great!!! I've been through this before and well I still am going through it and it's hard!! best luck:)

aznwingz ( F ) at 2005-07-29

i love this poem!

bwfc ( F ) at 2005-07-29

wow i realli feel left out! i avent made a comment yet! well omg omg omg i kno the person who rote this! n she's fit as :P

jazmin at 2007-05-07

Hey..... just added u to my favs... why because i loved ur poem..... i can really relate... i wanna hate that ass but i cant i love him too much.... i got played... and all i did was give him my heart!!! it's cool though i would still forgive him and take him back.... why... because there's no one else but him in my heart... i cant love no one else but him.... i loved your poem keep it up

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